Fiction Short Story: Rite of Passage

by Jonathan W. Hendricks



Rite of Passage: A Short Story of A Young Teen Trying to Make it Right, from Killing his Younger Brother.

A short story of a kid that accidentally kills his younger brother. Later he joins the military in believing that if he saves 100 lives, his sin will be forgiven and give him the rite of passage into Heaven. Rite of Passage eBook is about 7,762 words long.

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What an absolutely wonderful short story! Like the author, I grew up as a military brat. My own brother spent 11 years in the Marines. I didn't have nearly as much tragedy in my life as Mr. Hendricks, but it's clear that this has helped shape his narrative, Rite of Passage. It was truly an unexpected ride that I didn't see coming. I don't want to spoil the premise by giving away the story's coolest element, but I do want to encourage anyone to read this; especially if you were in the military (or have a fondness for such).

I'm not ashamed to admit that tears came to my eyes. That's a sign of a great story, in my opinion. I FELT something. At the end of the day, that's why we read; to escape and to feel something. Great Storytellers are masters at making us forget where we are, and experience something from another perspective. That's what happened here.

I'll definitely be on the lookout for more from Jonathon Hendricks! A+

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